Outline
{THESIS}
EXPLAIN THE DIFFERENT METHODS USED TO BRING AWARNESS TO THE ISSUES PRESENTED BY THE TWO GAMES.
{BODY 1}
EXPLAIN WHAT THE FIRST GAME WAS ABOUT, WHAT MESSAGE IT WAS TRYING TO GET ACROSS, AND WHAT TECHNIQUE IT USED TO BRING AWARENESS TO THE MESSAGE THEY WERE TRYING TO GET ACROSS
{BODY 2}
EXPLAIN WHAT THE SECOND GAME WAS ABOUT, WHAT MESSAGE IT WAS TRYING TO GET ACROSS, AND WHAT TECHNIQUE IT USED TO BRING AWARENESS TO THE MESSAGE THEY WERE TRYING TO GET ACROSS
{BODY 3}
CONCLUSION
In closing this essay was written to compare different methods of how an individual, or individuals, can bring awareness to issues that are relevant to them, using video games.
4 comments:
your thesis seems more like a claim, than a thesis, but your outline looks like you know what youre doing, and how youre going to do it!
good job!
your thesis I agree is a little vague but a good starting point. the outline looks really solid though... great work!
I agree with them, your thesis is more like a claim just switch your words around and it will sound better. Your outline on the other hand looks good.
Your thesis, as others have said, seems a bit too general, and the outline looks good. However, may I suggest that in order to exhibit the "differences" in the two games, you include another body paragraph comparing and contrasting the games.
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